This is pretty good! I think the person above over-exaggerated the amount of changes required. The healthy hair thing is dependent on how thick the persons hair actually is in my opinion. This is all I would do; [link] I originally just moved some lines on the upper head around, and make her right shoulder armor bigger- but then it looked like it needed some color
Eh, my hair used to be super, super thick before I started ruining it with bleach, and it was always reeeeeally flat. I would always snag it up at the roots or straighten it upward so it would appear like a sweet mane.
I of course, am still in the very long, dwindling process of learning how to draw semi-realistically. That being said, I'm definitely open to any suggestions people have to make. I'd totally redo this, but I'm just way too lazy. Thanks for the pointers though!
Nicely done, I especially like the detail on her shoulderpads. However, if you don't mind a bit of critique (Even if this is a bit old), the hair and her head seem a bit squished. To illustrate my point, I've done a quick redline of this, if you'd like a visual for what I'm trying to explain > [link] .
I've noticed it's because of the way I draw lol. I've started to lift up the paper and glance at it at a 90 degree angle to see if it looks fine, if not I twink it a bit. But thank you for the advice, of course!